Monthly Abandon

[Wayne]

Hello everyone. This is just a little piece of writing I just wrote yesterday.




MONTHLY ABANDON

August killed June.
September is sleeping at July's house.
December is panhandling.
January found April spewing
Out the back of February's house.
May jumped off the tallest building
And is now painted pavement.
November is fucking October.
March is in jail for blowing up a
Coffee maker in the middle of K-Mart.
September woke up and drove
His car off a cliff.
December found a man.
February found November
In November with October
And blew thier heads off.
January wondered how August killed
June if August is dead in his loungeroom.
This was all just a bunch
Of monthly abandon.


Hope you enjoyed it. Goodbye for now.

[Anne Westlund]

This made me laugh out loud. I found March to be the most interesting character in the story despite the murders and suicides. Good write!

[Dan Goodwin]

This is brilliant Wayne, very witty.

Have to say my favourite line is: November is fucking October.

Intriguing on so many levels!

Great last lines too -

"This was all just a bunch
Of monthly abandon."

More please!

Dan

[Frank]

This makes me wonder what you could do with the weekday names. Very imaginative piece and silly to the max - I like it.
Keep writing Wayne.